Saturday, January 10, 2009

Because You Suck: Chapter 20: Part 3

Zach’s hand clenched tightly around the neck of the champagne bottle, moistening in a sickly cold sweat. Felix gaped. Casey’s knee jerked up and down, and the driver slowly started to clean champagne off his windshield with a tiny piece of tissue paper.
The first to break the silence was Mikey, who demanded,
“Why did we stop?”
“We hit something.”
“I’ll clean the way.” Zach threw open the door and rushed out to the front of the car, as Casey glanced back at the driver and levelly demanded,
“Like… what?”
“Like a deer.”
At that moment Zach pounded on the windshield and Casey jumped in his seat, rolling up the window.
“It’s a deer.” Zach’s breathed, his words turning to fog in the cold evening air, “It’s bleeding, but it’s still alive— we need to move it out of the road.”
The passengers exchanged odd looks, but Zach urged them,
“Come on.”
The car emptied, walking a few steps behind Zach as he approached the mangled deer. Its feet looked crushed, bloat coating the candle-white fur along the hooves. He crouched down beside its heaving, damaged form, then stared up at Mikey, who had already been gawking down at him. After ten heated seconds, Zach snapped,
“You going to help?”
“It might have ticks. Or rabies.”
“Then call police.” Zach jumped to his feet and surveyed the deer again before adding, “I can’t tell how much blood it’s lost, but if we move it, it will lose more. I’ll block the road. You call police.”
With that, Zach marched to the center of the one-way road and wildly waved his arms.
“We have alcohol, Zach, that won’t work.” Casey reminded him, calling at him from a distance.
“What do you mean it won’t work?”
The limo driver piped up, “You’re all underage. I could lose my license…”
“We could get in trouble,” Mikey added.
“Forget that— It will die if we don’t do something.”
“That deer shouldn’t have jumped in front of our limo. Just move it to the side of the road, and let’s get going to the prom.” Casey exhaled, “We have a statement to make.”
“That can wait!” Zach called back, “And if you won’t call, I will.”
“Zach,” said Mikey.
Zach wouldn’t look at him, he just continued wildly flailing his arms with a hurt look on his face.
Zach, listen to me… I’ll call police, we’ll use another route. Now can we go to the prom?”
“We can’t leave it here! Another car might roll it over before the police come.”
Mikey furrowed his brow, “Well. Then you can stay here with the deer. You do whatever you need to do… I’m not going to let it ruin my night.”

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

hmmm deer..way unexpected
mikey being selfish and ready to leave him...that was expected

nice post
~sweetzsugar

Anonymous said...

hmmm deer..way unexpected
mikey being selfish and ready to leave him...that was expected

nice post
~sweetzsugar

Anonymous said...

its not surprising Zach is an animal lover, the boy has a pet pig! (he IS still alive, isnt he??) And he didnt kill Gentry's guiena pig, even though he could and is afraid of them. so him wanting tho save the deer instead of going to prom is not really surprising. what is is how...uncarin geveryone else seems to be. i mean, prom is all night, pretty much. waiting for the cops to save teh poor thing isnt that much of a party downer. i understand not wanting to touch it; the blood could ruin the tuxes (which would prob be rentals anyway). i dunno. i've got a soft spot for animals, so...
part of me wants to believe that Zach will be left in the middle of where ever they are, Gentry will find out, and come rescue him...the other part's saying Zach will just get back in the car in a huff and arrive at the prom with a major attitude. 50-50. i wonder, i wonder...

nice post =]

-PinknPunk

Anonymous said...

when are you going to post?!?